I have found that i have had to change lots of different things involving the images i have used, the colours anf the font and text size.
Here is the first photograph i have used;

The main problem that i had with my front cover was getting the main coverline and the title in the right position and the right size so that it catches my audiences eye as well as the position of my coverlines.
the font
whilst creating my front cover i used a variety of fonts to make my magazine seem effective but firstly i had to make lots of font changes as they where not suitable for the genre. the first font i used was IMPACT which was ok as a font but it was not the most effective the second i used magneto which when i asked for feedback i recieved comments that told me it did not help the magazine as the font was not effective as it was not bold and the magazine needed a good font to catch the audiences eye so i looked at lots of different fonts in adobe photoshop and finally found an effective font called WIDE LATIN then i just used the tools on photshop to add effects and colours.
changes
the changes i made on photoshop where just little things that would lose me marks like i did not have the right size font for my headline and the position was wrong as it was on a slant. so i placed the barcode correctly at the bottom of the magazine along with the date issue no etc and changed the position of the headline so it was horiztontial and a medium size font that did not domiate the front page and take the audiences eyes away from the title and other coverlines.
the contents page was the one i had to make the most changes to. it needed the most work as i had not included enough text and i had used the wrong sized font on the text.the tiitle was the wrong size anf the font was the same as i had used on my front cover which at the time was magneto. firstly i added to my publication plan to the regulars and features so that i had articles that made a full magazine. i used the colour red and black as it was the colours that was not popular in my questionnaire. i looked at some different magzine contents pages to give me some ideas. i rearranged the position of the title on the content spage and made sure that i used a diiferent font and added the magazine title as i found this in all the magazines to ensure that the reader knows what thay are loooking at. i added to my images as well page numbers to show my main coverlines. i added an extra image of my actual front cover as i found this in all my magazine contents pages and it looks professional.
here is my final contents page and you can see the changes i have made.
the images i used in my contetn spage needed manipulating th emost aswell becaus eit was the page with the most images i had to crop that and cut around some of them because they did not look like a professional image because of things in the background. i choose this images as they are approiate to my genre of magazine and my coverlines.
for my double page spread i excluded lots of little details that would cost me lots of marks i.e. no introduction and my name was not mentioned along with no standfirst to tell my audience what the article is about.
the image i used was a good image as it was relevant and positioned correctly along with the title but i lacked detail in the text part of my double page spread as important things did not stand out and it did not look professional or eye catching so when i relooked over different magazines i found bolder fonts and use orf more colour in certain areas to high light certain parts so i applied this to my article along with an introduction and standfirst. here is my final double page spread were you can see the changes i have made. i did not need to change the font but the size i needed to so that my text fit the text boxes and the title was to big so i ahve made it small.










